Monday, May 21, 2012

Poem : A Wish







There must have been enough reason
for keeping us apart,
Please reverse time,
I want to come closer to your heart.

Now I'm in your shoes,
So I have started understanding you.

There is a story behind every tear,
Memories flooding here.

Neither do I want flood nor story,
I just want you back with your humble glory.

I want to wipe humiliation,
hurt and tears from your store,
And give my smile, love and care
which you deserve more.





Images : Google Images

93 comments:

  1. This is deepen.

    (Those words put self to feels about it than everything else!)

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    1. Your words greatly relieve me, Thank you Omo!

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  2. Please reverse time... we want this so many times , Kitty:) Beautiful writing!

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  3. "miss you" is the awesome part.. - jana

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    1. Thats the feeling running throughout the poem... Thank you!

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  4. This is really nice, Kitty, and beautifully presented. Good job!

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  5. wow....i wish i could write like this one....

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    1. You can do better than this...you are already doing a nice job in your blog.

      Keep coming, Thank you! :)

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  6. hello Kitty ,

    superb poem..Its like u gave words to someone's feelings ,,,

    owesome..

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    1. Its a pleasure knowing that you felt so, Thank you!

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  7. Heart touching lines..:-) Beautifully written..:-)

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    1. Hello Nagini,

      welcome to my blog.
      Thank you so much for your nice words..
      keep coming!


      btw, I liked your blog very much, you're a versatile blogger! :)

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  8. awesome dear , I want to follow ur blog via email
    please add that widget

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    1. Ok, will try to put that widget soon..
      Thank you for the visit :)

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  9. Oh, so touching poem.. I love it, and I can relate with it in other way,.. I love reading it again and again, thanks Kitty for sharing..:)

    God bless you dear..:) Keep sharing..:)

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    1. Thank you for your warm and kind words. Your words humble me and I'm not quite certain how to reply!:)

      Always happy to see you around! :)

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  10. Looking back, everyone would relate to this poem, since there is no amount of love that can equal that what a mother gives. Beautiful.

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  11. Do not ever put a full dream or hope to others, if you do not want to feel the pain too deep, establish a strong foundation built by the liver strong conviction, record the history of the best thing you can do, I am happy to visit your blog .. a beautiful chant


    Steven

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    1. Hello Musadhique, welcome to my blog.
      Glad that you liked it.
      Keep coming, Thank you! :)

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  13. It touches the heart gently.
    A nice, gentle poem you have created!
    Keep going ahead!!!

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    1. Hi Suresh, nice to see you here after a long time..
      Thank you so much for sparing your precious time ! :)

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  14. Kitty, this really is a beautiful poem and I just love the picture that goes nicely with it. Wonderful.

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  15. i love poems and truly i wish time could be reversed.

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    1. Wouldn't that be awesome if we could reverse time?

      Thank you for visiting and leaving your nice comment.
      keep coming! :)

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  16. thank you....lovely things....you may be interested in my blog about the struggles in writing at www.afortunateman.wordpress.com and films and photography at www.robertgoldenpictures.com.
    kindest regards
    robert golden

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    1. Thank you Robert for coming here. I love your photography...beautiful photographs in your blog.

      keep coming,
      thank you! :)

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  18. Hi kitty, long time ,,

    When I read the poem,
    I turned to the pic,
    Still I could see the same
    feelings coming out from there.
    Your choice of words,
    and buildup of the poem is super& touchy

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    1. Hi Jar, happy to see you here after a long time..

      Beautiful comment Jar, very imaginative n touchy - Thank you so much! :)

      I know you've been busy lately with your new book.
      Thank you so much for sparing some time from your busy schedule. :)

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  19. Hi Kitty,:) Passing by to greet..:) Have a wonderful weekend!:)

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    1. Thank you so much Sagi...you too have a great weekend ! :)

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    1. How sweet, thank you so much for the Award..
      It's really a surprise to me, Thank you Ms mama, for your kind gesture! :)

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    1. Thank you, Steven! keep visiting :)

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  23. Nice flow. I'm just starting to blog, and have been browsing around looking for good quality blogs. Glad I found yours, nice to see good quality poetry out there, make me know I picked the right thing to do. Can't wait to read more of your poetry.

    Dan

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    1. Hello Dan, Welcome to my blog and to this blogging world ! :)
      I'm flattered by your words, Thank you!

      keep coming n' happy blogging :)

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  24. memories of our dear loved ones v will always cherish it.past can never be called back but past will ever remain an inevitable part of our life.."MOM" is de sweetest& most magical word a thing of beauty is ajoy 4ever..wish u pen more amazing poems like this 1..Kitty:D GOD<3U

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    1. exactly, we can't travel back in time but memories will live on forever...Thank you Adhi, nice to see you after a long time ! :)

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  25. Well said! Very beautiful and interesting poem.

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    1. Welcome to my blog, birdy ! :)

      Glad that you liked it.

      Thank you, come again! :)

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  26. Hi Kitty,

    Very touching poem. I love the lines that read; Now I'm in your shoes, So I have started understanding you. I can't help but to think of my Mom.

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    1. Glad that you can relate something I wrote...Thank you so much for your honest words..

      keep coming
      thnak you ! :)

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  27. Hi .. only come to India .. :)

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    1. Hi Sigit,

      I didn't get your comment...sorry !

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  28. such a touching poem. reminds me of the times where I regret not trying to put myself in others shoes...

    please check out my wordpress blog- I hope you will enjoy it.

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    1. Thank you blobbinhfish for your visit n nice comment.

      will visit your blog soon :)

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    1. Thank you Samrat !
      Nice to see you after a long time :)

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  30. I truly treasure your piece of work, Great post. from Extraordinary life

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    1. Thank you so much...truly apreciate your words!
      keep visiting!:)

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  31. A wish .... i could only relate it with my late mother , it was nice...

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    1. I'm grateful that you could connect with my poem.

      Hope to see you more often, Thank you!


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  32. So heart touching...feeling of heart is transformed into a lovely poem...congrates kitty

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    1. Thanks Shahin, I always love your comments..so satisfying ! :)

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  37. This poem is so amazing and deep. Makes me remember my late younger sister.

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    1. I'm grateful that you could connect with my poem.
      Thank you Rhipple for your visit n honest comment.
      come again ! :)


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  38. "Please reverse time"

    How many times we hope for that. But all in vain !
    Nice Poem, Thanks for sharing.

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  39. Thank you for the visit n nice words...keep coming! :)

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  41. Heartfelt poem, lovely write...

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    1. It means a lot, thank you so much ! :)

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  42. if only we can reverse the time..

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    1. I can feel every word of it, probably coz I can relate to it. Awesome portrayal,fineness of art

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    2. Hi Geeta, Welcome to my blog!:)
      Glad that you can relate something I wrote...
      thank you so much, truly appreciate your words!
      Keep visiting :)

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  44. great thought with great feelings :)

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