There must have been enough reason
for keeping us apart,
Please reverse time,
I want to come closer to your heart.
Now I'm in your shoes,
So I have started understanding you.
There is a story behind every tear,
Memories flooding here.
Neither do I want flood nor story,
I just want you back with your humble glory.
I want to wipe humiliation,
hurt and tears from your store,
And give my smile, love and care
which you deserve more.
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This is deepen.
ReplyDelete(Those words put self to feels about it than everything else!)
Your words greatly relieve me, Thank you Omo!
DeletePlease reverse time... we want this so many times , Kitty:) Beautiful writing!
ReplyDeleteThank you sir! :)
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ReplyDeleteThats the feeling running throughout the poem... Thank you!
DeleteThis is really nice, Kitty, and beautifully presented. Good job!
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Deletewow....i wish i could write like this one....
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ReplyDeletesuperb poem..Its like u gave words to someone's feelings ,,,
owesome..
Its a pleasure knowing that you felt so, Thank you!
DeleteHeart touching lines..:-) Beautifully written..:-)
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Deep heart felt poem....:)
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DeleteOh, so touching poem.. I love it, and I can relate with it in other way,.. I love reading it again and again, thanks Kitty for sharing..:)
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Thank you for your warm and kind words. Your words humble me and I'm not quite certain how to reply!:)
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Looking back, everyone would relate to this poem, since there is no amount of love that can equal that what a mother gives. Beautiful.
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Deleteyou just wrote my heart :)
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I really liked it..
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It touches the heart gently.
ReplyDeleteA nice, gentle poem you have created!
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Deletei love poems and truly i wish time could be reversed.
ReplyDeleteWouldn't that be awesome if we could reverse time?
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ReplyDeleteWhen I read the poem,
I turned to the pic,
Still I could see the same
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DeleteBeautiful comment Jar, very imaginative n touchy - Thank you so much! :)
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memories of our dear loved ones v will always cherish it.past can never be called back but past will ever remain an inevitable part of our life.."MOM" is de sweetest& most magical word a thing of beauty is ajoy 4ever..wish u pen more amazing poems like this 1..Kitty:D GOD<3U
ReplyDeleteexactly, we can't travel back in time but memories will live on forever...Thank you Adhi, nice to see you after a long time ! :)
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