Monday, December 27, 2010

Haiku Duo : Solitary & Truth

 (5-7-5 syllables)


             Solitary
    
            Mumbling n shaking
                  Feeling shy to tell the truth
           Fear of awkwardness...


                   Truth

          Dumb desperation
                Curious wandering mind
          Reality bites   
      





    Title ( Solitary) suggested by  Moonomo

                              Image  : Google Images        



12 comments:

  1. Coolest cool duo- express well enough the loneliness and how it keeps us aside from the mainstream!

    Your hands on Haiku should flourish and bring more and more exciting Haiku. ;)

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  2. Thank you Moon ! Without your support n encouragement it wouldn't have been possible.

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  3. At last, here it comes! Heartiest congratulations to you for this new wonderful blog! Love the way you express it. Keep going! :)

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  4. Thank you so much Balqis ! Your words really boost me...I appreciate it :)

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  5. better begining hope for d best ending...

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  6. there is no end for creative work :)
    glad that you liked it..
    keep visiting..thank you ! :)

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  7. So deep in thoughts and in sense too!
    Waiting for several such awesome gifts from you!!

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  8. Thank you for your encouraging words ! :)

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  9. How beautiful Kitty. Reminds me of me, when i was a young girl :) I was so shy.

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  10. :):)Yes, I feel the same way ! ;)

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  11. loved the way u have done comparison :)

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