Saturday, March 17, 2012

Haiku : Confusion

(5-7-5 syllables)


Am I expecting
too much or you're not worthy
of it? Quite dismal...


Image: flickr

22 comments:

  1. The first, I presume ... ;-)

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  2. O yeah! Nice to see you here rob..Thank you ! :)

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  3. oh, sad but meaningful haiku.. Hope you're just fine Kitty..:) Hug and kisses..:)

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    1. We tend to conceal our emotions or we exaggerate them when we work on creative field..especially in writing field, right? :D
      I'm perfectly fine, Thank you Sagi! :)

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  4. May be if it's worth you don't have to expect or may be you expect so it's not worth- quite confusing- yes! :))

    Good one- Kitty!

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    1. :))
      Yes-quite confusing... and you made me even more confused! :)

      Thank you Omo!

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    1. Thank you, Leoparsica !

      You've beautiful blog and you write beautifully :)

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  6. When we want someone in our life, to remain forever, then its our right to expect somehting from them, and these expectations are never too much! Expectations grow only when love grows, the person with us should understand this!
    Very lovely and meaningful poem friend! :)

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    1. Exactly Aakriti, You explained it so well! I second with your view.
      Thank you my friend ! Nice to see you after a long time, hope you're doing fine ! :)

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  7. In life we always continue to expect from others:)

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    1. Yes, exactly !
      Thank you for dropping by.. :)

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  8. when there are expectation and bonding .. confusion have to be..

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    1. Hmm...Thank you SS for dropping..:)

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  9. If they're not worth it, it's definitely time to move on. Well written haiku! I remember doing these in a college poetry class I took MANY years ago---always enjoyed the form!

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    1. Thank you mama for recalling n sharing few beautiful moments with us! :)

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  11. Expectations.. that's one thing around which life and relationships revolves around.
    Nice one.

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    1. yes, I agree with you !
      Nice to see you here, thank you Leo ! :)

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  12. postingan yang anda buat bagus.......

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  13. postingan yang bagus tentang haiku confusion

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