Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Haiku : Thoughts

(5-7-5 syllables) 
                                                                                         


 
As disturbed as waves,
Inside many things to come out,
Like a deep ocean.





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16 comments:

  1. CosmeticDermJuly 20, 2011 at 7:13 AM

    Too real!

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  2. KittyJuly 20, 2011 at 12:35 PM

    Hey Saliha ! How did you know I was waiting for your comment? :) I was quite sure that the first comment would be from you only ! Thanks a lot sweety ! :)

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  3. Saru SinghalJuly 21, 2011 at 9:41 PM

    Beautiful... First 4 words are awesome!

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  4. KittyJuly 21, 2011 at 11:47 PM

    Thank you Saru ! :)

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  5. Unseen World..!!!July 22, 2011 at 12:03 AM

    WOW.. .. U going to make layman fan of haiku :).. you place ur feelings so nicely..keep it up..waiting for more..!!

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  6. KittyJuly 22, 2011 at 12:33 AM

    I'm just trying..I too love haiku, short n sweet to express your feelings in few words :)
    Thank you for your encouraging words !

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  7. AakritiJuly 23, 2011 at 2:38 PM

    first line is awesome!!!!!!!!! :) nice haiku! :)

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  8. KittyJuly 23, 2011 at 3:32 PM

    O thanks Aakriti - nice to know that you liked it. :)

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  9. MoonomoAugust 2, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    wow! thought like ocean- :)

    A beauty- great work, Kitty!

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  10. KittyAugust 2, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    Ah- finally you arrived ! Thank you Moon :)

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  11. Suresh ShresthaOctober 3, 2011 at 5:10 PM

    So deep like ocean
    Great thoughts being churned inside
    It's time to wave up!

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  12. KittyOctober 4, 2011 at 10:33 AM

    Thank You Suresh for your nice Haiku ! :)

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  13. Deepak KarthikDecember 28, 2011 at 8:09 PM

    wow one ! I LIKE IT !

    www.deepakkarthikspeaks.blogspot.com

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  14. KittyDecember 28, 2011 at 10:00 PM

    Hi Deepak, welcome to my blog
    glad that you like it :)
    come often..
    thank you ! :)

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  15. Chapters From My LifeDecember 29, 2011 at 8:56 AM

    Beautiful

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  16. KittyJanuary 4, 2012 at 8:44 PM

    Hi Farida, Thank you ! :)

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