Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Haiku : Thoughts

(5-7-5 syllables) 
                                                                                         


 
As disturbed as waves,
Inside many things to come out,
Like a deep ocean.





                                                                                                          Image : Google Image

16 comments:

  1. Hey Saliha ! How did you know I was waiting for your comment? :) I was quite sure that the first comment would be from you only ! Thanks a lot sweety ! :)

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  2. Beautiful... First 4 words are awesome!

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  3. WOW.. .. U going to make layman fan of haiku :).. you place ur feelings so nicely..keep it up..waiting for more..!!

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  4. I'm just trying..I too love haiku, short n sweet to express your feelings in few words :)
    Thank you for your encouraging words !

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  5. first line is awesome!!!!!!!!! :) nice haiku! :)

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  6. O thanks Aakriti - nice to know that you liked it. :)

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  7. wow! thought like ocean- :)

    A beauty- great work, Kitty!

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  8. Ah- finally you arrived ! Thank you Moon :)

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  9. So deep like ocean
    Great thoughts being churned inside
    It's time to wave up!

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  10. Thank You Suresh for your nice Haiku ! :)

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  11. wow one ! I LIKE IT !

    www.deepakkarthikspeaks.blogspot.com

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  12. Hi Deepak, welcome to my blog
    glad that you like it :)
    come often..
    thank you ! :)

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