Monday, September 12, 2011

Haiku : Bleak

(5-7-5 syllables)




Ain't I alive or
Invisible to notice?
Hard to ignore this.











                                                                                  Image : Google Image



20 comments:

  1. Hard to ignore this and your words, beautiful...

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  2. Sometimes we stepping lively- sometimes we're almost invisible! Isn't that when we're hiding self- still it remains somewhere, somehow?

    Indeed, you can hide but you can't be hidden!

    Nice words, kitty! Bravo!

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  3. WOW - I like what you said ! Your comments have a lot of sense... You made me think more! :)

    Thanks Moon. keep coming ! :)

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  4. This is very touchy dear. I don't know that in what context, you have written this haiku. I might be wrong, but the thing which i perceive from this haiku is that- Life has become so competitive that even after having lots of talent and knowledge within us, sometimes we find our self getting lost in the crowd! There are times when it feels that our valuable worth is becoming cheapest!
    frankly speaking Kitty, this haiku completely expresses my thoughts, sprouting in my mind now a days. Thank you so much for this in a very perfect time, where i found a great opportunity to speak my heart out! I am feeling much relaxed now! :) :)
    THANK YOU SO MUCH FRIEND!
    Lots of love :)

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  5. Hey Aakriti ! you hit the nail right on the head. You pointed out my way of thinking, I couldn't agree with you more !
    I'm overwhelmed by your comment.
    Thanks a lot, truly appreciate !

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  6. Each dusk raises the hope for a new dawn.
    NO HOPE is, of course, to lead us to a new HOPE.
    A nice haiku, abstract, just searching something in some corner of hearts!

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  7. Hey Suresh- welcome back ! Nice to see you after a long time ! :)
    Thank you so much for your Brilliant comment ! Absolutely loved it :)

    Thank you!

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  8. Beautiful expression...one should never lose hope...kyon ki raat ke baad hi to sawera hota hai

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  9. Woh subhah kabhi toh aayegi... !

    Thank you Shahin, keep visiting :)

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  10. Great haiku!

    You are visible,
    Can't do to ignore you friend
    'Coz you are so kind..

    Have a wonderful day!.:)

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  11. Thank you Sagittarian for your kind words...

    keep visiting my friend !

    Have a wonderful day to you too ! :)

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  12. you expressed the feeling of very emotional and touched person .. awsome as like always .. short and sweet.. keep it up

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  13. Thank you so much !
    nice to see you again here :)
    keep coming.

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  14. Good one as always. And so, it's really hard to ignore.:)

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